Evil Warrior
jawine | 02/15/2008 @960 | edit post

http://www.jawine.com/2008_02_10DragonWarriorp6.jpg An evil warrior type guy bit like the evil bloke in Higlander although I got the idea before I saw that movie ^_^ I realised that my last artwork was a bit rough that is not exactly in line with the idea of GFX to post the best you have. So please critique this one so I can post a tiptop artwork this time. If you are bored or want to pour your heart out feel free to look at my other artworks to pick up things I consistently do wrong...sometimes you kind of get stuck in your own style. Thanks a billion ^_^ Jawine

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pyrokid | 02/15/2008 @964 | edit post

The eyes look a bit scary, scary in weird they look like their being held open with sellotape(duct tape is kinda like sellotape for those wh don't know what sellotape is) and the spike at the top seems to be drooping I dont know if thats meant to be happening. [Message edited on 02/15 @966]

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Madster | 02/16/2008 @055 | edit post

The eyebrows and forehead are raised more in surprise than in scary. The overall face and body look more like a woman than a man, mainly because of the eyes, and the "cleavage" divider on the chestplate. The crooked teeth and the weird things on the side of the helmet make it look like some sort of weird orthodontic device. The chin looks like a butt. Nice colors, good linework, and a clear and consistent light source. Nice work. ~M [Message edited on 02/16 @056]

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jawine | 02/16/2008 @530 | edit post

http://www.jawine.com/2008_02_10DragonWarriorp7.jpg Update taking your comments on board [Message edited on 03/02 @577]

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Daykan | 02/16/2008 @793 | edit post

Better than the previous helmet!! The expression it´s great!!!! Good lights!

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Madster | 02/16/2008 @816 | edit post

Great improvement on the face and helmet! The glowing breast cleavage still needs work, 'tho. ~M

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jawine | 02/23/2008 @770 | edit post

http://www.jawine.com/2008_02_10DragonWarriorv2p2.jpg Decided to turn it into a full battle scene, hope the armor design is a bit clearer now, think the chest might be a bit to narrow makes him look like a gir l ^_^ [Message edited on 03/09 @683]

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Madster | 02/23/2008 @845 | edit post

No, it is the glowing cleavage you have made for the center of the chestpiece that makes it look like a girl, with a very low cut armor chestpiece...The curves, the center divider, and the weird light reflections will continue to make this look like a girl. Widening the chest will just make it look like a fatter girl... ~M

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whatwillthisfix | 02/24/2008 @894 | edit post

Madster is right about the armor. Also, the body is a bit small for the head.

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Elitha | 02/25/2008 @180 | edit post

Woah! If I ever came face to face with that gyu I think I'd run away screaming!

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jawine | 03/02/2008 @578 | edit post

http://www.jawine.com/2008_02_10DragonWarriorv2p4.jpg Changed the armor let me know if it's better now. Foreground needs more details but am going to work on background after this otherwise I might mess up the balance of the picture. [Message edited on 03/16 @843]

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Madster | 03/02/2008 @702 | edit post

Much better without the clevage, but the light shining on the top of it still does not correspond with any of your light sources... Overall, though, he looks good. Once you shape up the background, I think it will be fine. ~M

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jawine | 03/09/2008 @686 | edit post

Worked on background and colours/saturation. The character and foreground need more work IMHO so those are next to work on

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jawine | 03/16/2008 @844 | edit post

Kept in the multiple light sources...yes the blue one is a bit weird (top light) as the rest of the sky is turned red from fires but a repaint is risky at this stage. And time for new stuff

Re: Evil Warrior
jawine | 03/17/2008 @534 | edit post

Now finished see: Dark Warlord by  jawine Thanks for all the comments