Angry amazon, sketchy line-drawing
Simson | 04/19/2008 @539 | edit post

The second WIP I'm submitting here. Still havent managed to get the last one (Female pose (First post!)) finished enough to put on my profile. But anyway, this is what I'm working on right now. Any input is appreciated! ----------------- EDIT Concept input is certainly welcome, so I'll just say something about what the picture is supposed to be. The character belongs in a modern superpowered setting with a fairly realistic feel (apart from there being supers flying around, obviously!). Most supers don't use comic book spandex outfits, but something like a uniform or "work outfit" fitting a super-powered fighter type is definitely right. Also, I like mixing cliché with non-cliché a bit... The character is supposed to be a fighter with super-fysique, a spear/javelin as her trademark weapon, a bit of skimpiness in her outfit. Oh, and she's probably a bit of a drunk as well! ;-) So, any suggestions on what to add or change? -----------------

Re: Angry amazon, sketchy line-drawing
curlyhair | 04/20/2008 @384 | edit post

I think her head is a bit too big and the spear is too small Some more concept on wearing and weapon can improve it.How about to put some armor on her?

Re: Angry amazon, sketchy line-drawing
Simson | 04/23/2008 @559 | edit post

Hmm, are you sure about the head? There's pretty much foreshortening going on there... Anyone else agree? Yeah, more concept ideas would be great. I added some basic assumptions in the first post to make it easier to know what I want with it. Some armor could be good, but as she is a super it might be hard to motivate. The elbow guards are a sort of a compromise, but I don't know, they might be too lame... I think the spear has to stay that size, though. It should be more like a javelin, and I don't want it too feel all warhammer, y'know!

Re: Angry amazon, sketchy line-drawing
Llourn | 05/10/2008 @096 | edit post

Great work so far. Some input, Her left arm, with the elbow guard, looks a little off. Almost like the forearm and upper arm are being connected loosely by the elbow guard. You might want to push the forearm up further to make it look more attached. (i hope that made sense lol) Her left ankle looks a little tricky, might want to watch the persective there. Can't wait to see more of it.

Re: Angry amazon, sketchy line-drawing
DofS | 05/28/2008 @020 | edit post

She looks like she's pmsing! Good job I must say, the spear is a good length for what it is. Keep it up.

Re: Angry amazon, sketchy line-drawing
ekim | 05/29/2008 @267 | edit post

that chic looks cool. The running pose and the expression in the face look real. What is disturbing the whole impression seems to be her left arm - as if it were too long. Look up some references from Female Anatomy for Artist Lycka till! [Message edited on 05/29 @268]