Yep, you said it: the hand. The head look a bit big too. The colors are wonderful!!
Keep working, you´re a great artist Ioana!!
Thanks for share with us!

agree with you Daykan this is my first work like this and it was so hard to make something like this but practise ...

YEAH! This is the spirit!! Keep working!!

Nice dynamic pose. I think the bent leg looks a bit too short, even at this perspective. The bugs are cute.

Very good perspective and colors!....good work Ioana!
Carlos

I would say to work on the anatomy, but of course, the road to anatomical perfection is really long! The best thing you can do for yourself is to use photo references for your poses.

Also, the shading on the fly's head is a bit off.. its not round enough...

Great character design! Keep up the good work!

Hey Raz, been a long time. Nice action drawing! Seems you are trying all sorts of new techniques. Well here my critique First of all, I would work on the linework a little bit. The lines in some places are way too think and it takes away from the perspective anatomical drawing, you really lose the human form in there. In fact, the problem with that back hand is that you tried to put too many lines in. Also you need to pay attention to how the thumb work compared to the rest of the fingers. Remember the thumb is on the inside of the hand Next thing, I just wanted to say, the foot looks awesome. Only thing there I might like to see is a shadow or a little patch of ground to really show her pushing off. Its a bit odd, but it also looks like her hand is planted on something. I feel like her breast is a bit odd in the sense that it is hanging really low, especially at that angle (her back is almost completely facing us). Her left thigh seems a bit short to me but that also might just be from some of the thick lines on the lower part of the leg, I dont know, doesnt bug me too much haha. The flies are great, I loves the purples you have used throughout the piece. Such an underused color, but if you look closely, almost every object in the world contains a little purple Anyway, keep working on this kind of stuff, and at the speed you progress with things, you will be a master in no time. Sorry I missed so much by the way, I will try to write some crits for the stuff i missed soon!

Nice one, I like the very dynamic lines ^^

Very nice.