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d é c o m b r e s

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 04/05/08 @001 | Jafus | Comments critiques (37) | Views views (511)


d é c o m b r e s
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2008-Ankara/Turkey

3exp HDR..

C&C always welcome! :)
 
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Avatar Daykan

 04/05/08 @010

Awesome color in the sky, Yavuz!!!
Very nice, i like this desolated place!
 
Avatar moserArtist

 04/05/08 @230

Good use of HDR and wonderful end result.
You are really getting to master this technique! :)

Also having an interesting sky adds!

For this wrecked building I would have preferred some more space on the right (without actually knowing what will be on that side). The composition is just asking for some space... ;)

Seems as you have better control of the light (in the window) on the colored version.
 
Avatar everseen

 04/05/08 @341

S&B olani harika olmus hocam. Tebrikler :)
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 04/05/08 @391

I like that the image shows the interesting details of the building ... it's textures and graffiti. I agree with Patrick that a wider angle would help to provide a better composition.
 
Avatar moserArtist

 04/05/08 @405

@everseen: Keep your conversation going in english please... ;)
 
Avatar everseen

 04/05/08 @487

Oops! I just said i like black&white version.( I'm new here (huh) )
 
Avatar Jafus

 04/05/08 @496

:) very thanks Matias, Patrick, Everseen, Michelle
@moser, michelle: You are right about the angle but a new structure is building on right, that looks very distracting;)
 
Avatar blackshad

 04/05/08 @523

excellent use of HDR, its still looking natural
i like both version... well done :) +9
 
Avatar GTO

 04/05/08 @600

great work man...I like the BW version...looks more drammatic for this abandoned building...
 
Avatar ersen-t

 04/05/08 @614

good shot.
agree with Moser about more space.
 
Avatar workster

 04/05/08 @641

Nice work. Good use of HDR.
 
Avatar headhake

 04/05/08 @706

the colors are very good... the HDR fits well and gives us more details... cool... keep up!

Hugo Zenha
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 04/05/08 @709

Very well done. I much prefer the B&W version as it is more haunting.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 04/05/08 @737

Beautiful. Both versions.
 
Avatar mamoun

 04/05/08 @830

Excellent work Very well done Jafus!
+10
 
Avatar androx3k

 04/05/08 @830

As always!!!!! top score for the first colored version. The second one doesn't convince me anyway. +9
 
Avatar cupcake

 04/05/08 @861

Good work,
I like the first one best.
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 04/05/08 @902

Beautiful HDR!
you are a HDR Maniac I love your style my friend
Good luck (thumbup)
 
Avatar ahmetnuman

 04/05/08 @903

Sky interesting and awesome. I like colored version.
Well done (thumbup)
 
Avatar vede

 04/05/08 @913

she can tell a story :) ...nice
 
Avatar purplerose

 04/06/08 @969

The B/W is the better one for me. The tones work better and invoke a better mood. The color version just feels like a snapshot of a building to me.

I think they both could use more space to the top and left.

On a side note, I think you have reached a point in your photography where you should be able to decide which version you want to show us. YOU are the photographer, what you presents defines you, you shouldn't define youself based on the reactions of others. Presenting two versions like this gives me the impression that you are confused (which I'm sure you aren't).

by far, I think your B/W HDRs are stronger than the color versions, they have better tonal contrast and invoke better moods.

+7

(I think this is the longest comment I've ever written on this site.)
 
Avatar WarrenLouw

 04/06/08 @384

Great photo, both the colour and black and white. very good angle. the background and foreground compliment each other well.
 
Avatar ridvan

 04/06/08 @779

interesting syntax
+9
 
Avatar NiasHZed

 04/06/08 @868

Agree with ridvan
very nice clouds
 
Avatar oldskool87

 04/07/08 @959

nice :)
 
Avatar KariceWest

 04/07/08 @450

Like both one...
 
Avatar Vasco

 04/07/08 @580

Great great work! Very well done! I enjoy the B&W a bit more.
 
Avatar Tommyguns

 04/07/08 @884

Nice work! +9

Tommyguns
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 04/08/08 @947

first, can I say the technique of HDR is well used here.

So well done on that..
as for the image, well its a little tight on the right and while the building is good it lacks a bit of WOW, something to give it a lift..

Well done...
 
Avatar Madanapale

 04/09/08 @036

I prefer the color one.
Beautiful details ....great textures!!
Excellent technique.
Carlos
 
Avatar HuseyinKARA

 04/09/08 @710

Hi Yavuz,
This is really very beautifull. My Turkey ... :) Mustafa is to attract attention
 
Avatar twistoflime

 04/09/08 @714

I too prefer the color version. Very nice perspective. The subject has a lot of interesting features which help create movement and interest. Agree about the need for a touch more space on the right. The dark sky in the B&W version doesn't work for me.
 
Avatar yvy

 04/09/08 @874

good postprod.
 
Avatar Jossie

 04/09/08 @927

Great shot!
 
Avatar MertAcar

 04/10/08 @775

Great shot mate

+10

Mert
 
Avatar FAV

 04/10/08 @918

nice HDR. love the colored one.
you know, I am in Istanbul now. Love it !!!
Florin
 
Avatar Simba

 04/11/08 @560

outstanding
 
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