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Photography Photography \ Vehicle | 04/18/08 @441 | DANKA | Comments critiques (10) | Views views (553)


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Hi all,
I want post some photo I recently did...I use a Nikon compact camera...
A bit of contrast and color balance retouch with photopaint...
 
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Avatar ADY

 04/18/08 @450

Nice Shot! Has the feel of illustration. Nice work!
 
Avatar Vasco

 04/18/08 @491

The white balance seams a bit strange to me. There's a strange blue spot, almost in the center of the composition, in the green snow! . It's a bit noisy and the top light doesn't really works for me, nor do the white poles and the building in the top left. I like the lines going from one side to another, the tacks, the train, the top of the platform. But I'm sorry to say that this just doesn't works for me... Just not what I used to see here in Elite Galleries.
Sorry.
 
Avatar cupcake

 04/18/08 @569

Nice capture with a compact camera.
I think a B&W with a light blue tint would look good also.
;)
 
Avatar moserArtist

 04/18/08 @578

Composition looks a bit unbalanced. Would try horizontal presentation and have less empty space.

The green cast shows that the white balance is off. :p

The blue spot is probably from overexposure.

Edit: Changed my wording about white balance. ;)
 
Avatar Byonder

 04/18/08 @611

@ Elite moserArtist: "white balance setting is a basic knowledge" -- you know, it wasn't too long ago that you had no idea what "white balance" was. And it's not basic knowledge to a painter. Your critiques have been pretty pompous lately...

Elite DANKA: In this case the adjusted color-balance doesn't really bother me -- the greenish / reddish hues compliment each other. Unfortunately the composition is a little bland. I always enjoy a good shot of a train / station. The location has promise, but I don't think this shot really captures it.

Since your painting skills are what got you into the "elite" galleries, I would recommend creating an alternate account for your photography.

Keep shooting and experimenting :)
 
Avatar purplerose

 04/18/08 @907

I like the color combo here, makes for a nice mood.

Would crop off most of the bottom half of the photo, starting right above the blue spot. This should help balance out the composition somewhat.

A bit noisy.

+7
 
Avatar Madanapale

 04/19/08 @049

Very nice perspective....great mood!
Carlos
 
Avatar taaeb

 04/19/08 @069

wonderful shot :) +9
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 04/20/08 @609

Nice Mood! :)
I like the composition
 
Avatar DANKA

 04/21/08 @612

Ok ok ...let's reply :)
First of all thanx for all C&C !!!
I think I must spend some words on this shot (on all my photocamera shots maybe) despite my very bad english... :(

ADY: Thanx! you hit my intent! ;-)

Vasco: Thanx to find time to comment my shot! My intent with photograpy it's to find something original, closer to an illustration or a graphic image then a traditional photograpy. But, probably, you and Byonder are pretty right about the wrong place to post that shots.Thanx again.

cupcake: Thanx :)

moserArtist: I don't agree with you about composition. Horizontal presentation would be too many banal for that scene :) I don't see empty spaces..Thanx for your time!

Byonder: Thanx! I agree about an alternate account for my shots.. not on the same level of my elitary paintings... :)

purplerose: Thanx! I know...the noise is because my iso aren't enough for night scene like that...

Madanapale: Hi Carlos thanx but... I think you are too much kind with me! Nothing about wrong exposure or bad white balance? :p

taaeb: Thanx!...exagerate ;-)

ARZILLIER66: Many thanx!

Thanx all again to find time to take a look an post replies...
 
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