Good

The refference looks mad, and you drew it nice

+7/8

Just keep practising!

I like what you made of it, Watch the hair, the highlights look nice, but when you do highlihgts, also draw darker shadowed areas. And try to divide hair into different locks, not just draw single strands.

Also a little more shadowing in the face will look nice but I think you already did a good job on it.. the lips don't look natural (too dark) so I assume there is some imaginary lipstick involved ?

I like the nose a lot by the way!

good luck on the drawing and keep doing it!
love
Marleen

not bad...I think the contrasts are pretty good. The hair under the chin should be darker though...nice job +8

nice one!
maby if you check the nose betwen the eyes, you can fix it, its a bit distort.

good work..+8

agree with Marleene about the hair issue...also, although the lower part of the nose is very well made, the upper part, whick links it to the eyes, is too flat.
and the neck doesnt look natural either, take a better look at any image and you'll understand what i'm talking about
also, the neck neds more shading in the lower part..the one you did is good, but it continues itself even more down her neck
and some shading on the cheeks and some smile lines would be needed too
overall its your best piece, i see a lot of progress

Thank you for the helpful comments Thank you all

Lovely work! Marleene is right about the hair indeed. The part between the eyes is a little bit flat. You should work on the cheeks around the corners of the mouth to give more volume Well done, your best so far IMO!
She reminds me of Catherine Zeta Jones
+7

i like her eyes effect +10/10

nice!!- to me it gives more of a fantasy look more then realistic .. and maybe you were aiming for that.. BUT! great reflection/shading work REALLY NICE

keep it up
VenoM +9!

also her face sort of resembles Scarlett Johanson lol.. she has sort of that look ..like her hehehe anywayz
nice drawing

Beautiful eyes and lips...and that nose is good. Agree with the critiques above, still nice work. U are getting better.

wenn du so weiter malst, wirst du bald ELITE
mal schön fleißig weiter, ich gebe dir für dieses schöne bild die note 9

drunken

Thank you all for the comments and the votes
@drunken-master: Ich versuche mein bestes Ich mach auf jeden fall weiter

your rate of improvement is pretty fast. keep it up!

nice drawing u are talented the only thing that disturbes me a little are her teeth...maybe it would be better to make them not at all visible just my own tastes

The lower face is perfect! The eyes and the diadem look somehow less realistic... I think they are in different angles compared one to another. Perfect shading Keep it up!

Ich find die Augen wunderschön, genauso die Darstellung des Mundes, so leicht offen, mit den fast schon erotisch anmutenden schwarzen Lippen. Einfach hinreißend

Hi Tina: i like this work!
you have future

Very Good

Thank you all for the comments and the votes
@ARZILLIER66: do you think? Thank you

Cool!
Und dann auch noch aus den Spawn-Comics. Sehr fein!
Dein Charakter könnte wirklich aus dem Himmel stammen. Das Haar hast du sehr schön hinbekommen.
Ich würde dir empfehlen Schattieren noch ein wenig zu üben, damit du damit noch freier spielen kannst.

@ gods-mistake: ich lese kein spawn... ich lese nur lady death. und die walküre, die im in den eingescannten comic bildern zu sehen ist, ist ihr schwester , vandala. (nur mal so als kleine rand information)

Hey...
Ich bins wieder. Sieht nicht übel aus. Du hast es einfach drauf

Schau selbst hier(Link) oder hier. (nochn Link)

Sehen sich ähnlich die beiden.
Bei Spawn sind die Valkyrien die Armee des Himmels, um dann auch mal meinen scheinbar sinnfreien Kommentar zu erklären.

die sehen sich echt voll änlich.
bei lady death leben die walküren in asgard und sind beschützerin asgards.

everyone seem to be talking german here
I searched for you 2 words in the dictionary:
----Valkyrie: noun
"(Norse mythology) one of the maidens of Odin who chose heroes to be slain in battle and conducted them to Valhalla" (I'm not sure of what this means...)
----diadem: noun
"An ornamental jewelled headdress signifying sovereignty" synonym of crown.

The girl is very pretty, she has such gorgeous eyes. the left eyebrow should be longer, it should be farther than the eye. thats why the nose looks wierd. The mouth is beautiful but, look at yourself in a mirror and smile: notice how the skin around the mouth reacts. that is to say this part could use a bit more shading. you should work more on the neck.s shadows, it's too rough.
appart from that, this drawing is awesome. +7