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Skybureau

Skybureau

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 05/17/06 @980 | robwo | Comments critiques (13) | Views views (436)


Skybureau
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An older photo, but I used it in my application portfolio recently... and succeeded.

[EDIT] I updated the photo with a version with higher tones in the sky, as incouraged in the comments below. Enjoy!
 
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Avatar Madanapale

 05/17/06 @024

Very good perspective and composistion!!...nice gray zones!
Maybe a little increase of the whites with levels or selective colors?
Carlos
 
Avatar MrBlue

 05/17/06 @290

I go with Carlos here.
The whites could be a tad brighter, I guess.
The sky and architecture are well-captured and create a good sense for modern
architectural design.
 
bbreeze

 05/17/06 @509

agree with CAlros in everything =) just started writing mostly the same and after that mentioned his words =)
in genereal. Good picture
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 05/17/06 @584

cool man! i love this shot.
escellent composition and beautiful gray tones. +10
 
Avatar sdavis75

 05/17/06 @634

Overall an excellent, well composed shot. The contrast is almost dead on, but I agree that you should brighten the highlights just a bit. Beyond that, excellent work.
 
Avatar robwo

 05/18/06 @972

Thanks for the constructive feedback! (thumbup)

I'm going to work on the highlights and update the shot tomorrow.
Stay tuned... ~:0
 
Avatar DreamShadow

 05/18/06 @352

very good perspective...agree about the contrast thing though :p and the sky looks great :) i bet a coloured version would work as well - if the sky was blue and cloudy and there were enough reflections to highlighten :)
nice work :p
 
Avatar oldskool87

 05/18/06 @830

very nice... u could rotate it a bit to the left so that the front of the building is at 90o... still good work... the bw works great... well done :)
+9
 
Avatar robwo

 05/18/06 @835

I just updated the picture. Brighter highlights now...

Does it work out? What do you think?
 
Avatar Madanapale

 05/18/06 @836

Looks better Robert!
Carlos
 
Avatar Traff

 05/19/06 @387

The image is great - and composition works well... but the text runs across a crucial part of the image and i find it hard to appreciate the full impact of what I know logically is there.... how about including the text in a border outside of the image? I think it would improve the dynamics.
The contrasts look perfect to me... but you just updated it before i got here

8) Phill
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 05/19/06 @479

Looking really good...
I dont think its straight ! 9+
 
Avatar locutus

 05/19/06 @695

Very nice getting the edge right in the center - balances everything out.
 
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