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Crocus

Crocus

Photography Photography \ Nature | 05/25/06 @621 | Astraia | Comments critiques (9) | Views views (392)


Crocus
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Avatar Almost-Human

 05/25/06 @645

Good useof the tree trunk. Needs to be closer at least to remove the trunk right top..
 
Avatar Madanapale

 05/25/06 @663

Nice perspective....agree with AlmostHuman.
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Carlos
 
Avatar coladelight

 05/25/06 @670

With the composition as it is, the subject focus is too centered, sometimes it works but I also feel lthis would look better with the suggestions above.
Nice angle though :)
Maridol
 
Avatar Byonder

 05/25/06 @710

In addition to the comments above I'd say it could use a bit more contrast as well. Personally I find the tree-trunk more interesting than the flower, but that's probably just me :p Keep shooting :)
 
Avatar beatrizmatar

 05/25/06 @718

Sweet and nice :)
 
Avatar Dreamwalker

 05/25/06 @741

lovely piece...
 
Avatar Traff

 05/25/06 @857

You've thought about the composition... nice lead into the image along the tree trunk up into the flower, and then out of the image.
The trunk itself is probably the most interesting part of the image... great changes in textures and tone... the flower should contrast that with its fragile simplicity but I think this time it's just overpowered by it.... that's the way it goes sometimes
Changing the crop to take the flower off-centre would add a bit of spice to the composition... cropping down from the top to remove the trunk far right (as per AH) would be a good starting point...
This is a nice pic (you can tell i like it 'cos I found so much to say about it!)

8) Phill
 
Avatar moserArtist

 05/26/06 @394

Cropping off the top and right would give it a better flow IMHO.
 
Avatar oldskool87

 06/01/06 @582

nice :)
+8
 
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