Good use of soft focus, would prefer to see the girl holding the helmut
Why has she got it on without any shoes?
Dont like the highlight on the wall bottom right..
Well done, !!

Very nice use of soft focus!!...Great mood!!....Lovely model!!
I would crop a little from the bottom.
Well done!
Carlos

Was she wearing high socks just prior to this shot? I'd remove those rings above her calves.

the focus is a little weird. It seems like the wall is in focus rather than the subject.

beautiful shot! i agree whit the softfocus comment.
i like it. nice composition. +9

Great soft tone and cool model!
Agree with Carlos to crop from the foreground.

The soft focus is really nice.
But why are there so many artifacts around her legs, the helmet etc?
JPEG compression? Or did that happen during processing the picture?

Like the crop - the tonal range, and the concept.
The pose looks a little uncomfortable - doesn't seem to flow for me somehow...
And i think you've maybe overcooked the background blurr a little - the wall/model don't seem to be part of the same pic, they look a little stark at the edges where they should be merging into the background.
The graffitti on the wall adds to the atmos of the image... nice one!

Phill

Cool model indeed. I would have liked a little more contrast. Still, very nice work!