great kuroneko!
i like the way you combined the demon part with the human part.
i'd really like to see more of your talent
+10

amasing! you sure can do great things with a pencil! she has one lovely eye

Intereseting work. I like your style

Tina, every time I see bigger progress in your works!
i see an extrange shadow on the lips, you need to soften the shades ( is my opinion)
i like the character, and the composition
+9

Thank you all for the comments and crits

better at the hair, i agree
from what i see you only used H pencils...you should variate them and use B pencil;s as well...i for one don't use H's, only Hb, which i find the most versatyle
ok, anatomy...the demon-eye is too low, you'll have to check your perspective for that
the nose is maybe too small
the shading is insufficient and should be softer...the shading on her cheek is too strong compared to the rest of the face...it should also fade-out delicately, not end so abbruptly
lose the strong outline between her upper and lower lip...just do some strong shading that fades toutwards
and try to avoid making the torso structure so rigid...the lines should flow and the shading should be more variated
some tips...
to see the faults in your drawings...just make a scan of the drawing or a photo and flip it...you'll see eventual mystakes a lot easier
also, regarding shading, you should first draw a gray base...a soft grey, not a strong one
its gonna be much easier to go forth with shading from there on, and you'll also avoid unwanted contrast

dont consider this a mean comment, its quite the opposite
you're improving very fast, and for your age its a very good job
keep it up

wow that's the longest analysis I've ever seen cigaro write!

cool concept...you should follow her advice and keep up the good work! +8

Very Nice

da bin .. das bild gefällt mir sehr
die linke gesichtshälfte (human) sieht klasse aus, das linke auge ist dir gut gelungen auch die schattierung wurde sehr schön umgesetzt. der ohrring passt gut zum bild und sieht auch ganz schnike aus

so.. jetzt zu den verbesserungsvorschlägen
bei der schattierung sollte man nicht schmieren, stattdessen mehr schraffieren. bei der rechten gesichtshälfte (demon) würde ich noch mehr schatten hinzufügen, die sieht noch etwas zu hell aus. das rechte "demon"-auge ist etwas tiefer als das linke auge. der mund an sicht gefällt mir sehr, allerdings wirkt der mund durch der schwarzen linie zwischen den lippen, und die zähnen? an der seite sehr merkwürdig.

ich habe die demon-seite mal abgedeckt und muss sagen.."Wow"!
die humen-seite ist dir sehr gut gelungen! ich glaub wenn die frau ganz "humen" wär, hätte ich dir eine 10 gegeben.
da einige fehler und unstimmigkeiten vorhanden sind, gebe ich dir diesmal nur eine 9. Ich finds toll, dass zu fleißig weiter malst. weiter so!

great artwork, very nice eye! well done!
drunken

Very good drawing, I don't know what drunken said... but I agree

wow thats cool and weird.. and awesome and weird and pretty and WEIRD!.. lol!

WONDERFUl
venoM +9

lots of good advice in there, definately for you age your improving quickly +9, and a smiley

thank you all for the comments and crits

I love those mix-breed stories... I agree with Cigaro about the eyes, but I like the design of the demon eye

Good work but the eyes are not at the same height I really love the way you did her left eye!
+9

interesting work!
i love the hair!

I know this is late, but I love the earring!
+9

thank you all!!

eyes seem a bit big. nice one though !

I agree about everything cigaro said, so I won't loose time repete it.
This is my favorite of yours so far. I see HUGE improvement in this one, compared to the valkyrie one. The nose is much better this time and links to the eyebrow, wheras the valkyrie one linked to the eye, which was an anatomy mistake. a good this to learn from our mistakes .
the nose and mouth are a bit too near from eachother. The human eye is very well done. the earring really adds a lot the the whole composition. the shadow under the neck looks like a necklace... not sure if that's what you intended.. The hair is perfect IMO.
I like the concept of the drawing a lot. you managed something great ! +9

Her "good" eye is beautiful... lovely work!

Great pencil work.Good design on her face. +9/10

awesome concept!!! XD