Welcome to GFX !!!
So just One light ...... Hmmn !!!
the light on the body looks ok But still wish there was some more on the face (as a fill light )!!! The pose is good !!!
+9

welcome!
beautiful model, very sexy outfit! the lightning is nice, but her face is too dark.. her hair's quite unsharp and if i'm not erring, I can see some traces of post processing on her leg on the right, but I excuse myself if this is natural! the background would be perefect, if it was totally black, but it's seems to be a little bit exposed in the middle part, theres also quite a lot of noise in that area
so, that's my crit =) seems to be a lot, but I still like the picture a lot! great expression of her face, very natural! +7/10
Philipp

it's a bit grainy.. i would do something about the grain.

Beautiful model thats for sure. The lightning of the body looks very good but her face to dark. I'd like to see some pics of the next session with this model.

Screw the noise, guys above have valid points about the lighting of the face. She's pretty, even softer light would suit her better, imo (especially in the upper body part, the lower part is fine with me, boobies lighting is ok too).
I've sent you a message with an explanation

Beautiful model....I miss a true black and a white.....and there are some uneven distracting spots on the background.
Maybe another lighting and exposure?
Carlos

More light would be nice.

Thanks to all. I was prepared all my profile in a big rush, working on some comercials and forgot change proof setup from CMYK to RGB Now it's fixed.

Seems underexposed overall. Possibly could've used a fill (or at least a reflector). Background and parts of skin (upper arm, backside and leg) are blotchy/grainy. Pretty model and good pose. Keep at it.

To Byonder: Grain? 400 ISO. Not underexposed. Low-key. That's plan. As well as no fill light

Good use of low key lighting. I see no disturbing noise or grain and like the black background. I'd prefer black panties though.

To Gary: Thanks. - Or pink

If you'll brighten the contrast on your monitor I believe you'll see what I was talking about. It's not an even grain -- it's blotchy. Possibly JPEG distortion.

Yes, it's JPEG distort. 30 x 45 cm print from TIFF is OK.

Very good photo. I like the spots where the skin shines, as well as the slight light.
Very good exposure and sharpness for such conditions.

Very nice lighting

boost your sharpness and focus a bit for the future...the face is a bit too soft imo
ther than that...good job

maximum points from me.. just flipping fantastic.. there is a cuteness about her combined with that look of "what lift this...hehehe just kidding" and giving u a look of cheeky inocence... ( i swear i have never experienced this.. honest.. no seriously... haha i think perhaps because of that it brings back memories? and the image is so perfectly done that i love it more?)

i love the shadows, though perhaps just a smigion more light bounce onto her face would have been nice.. i love how the light is on certin parts of her body.. esp her legs..

really.. just so damn fantastic

(i wish i could say 10 out of 10.. but i can only vote 9.. so 9/9)

VERY sexy

Perfect usage of one light source imo. Pose/shades, so likeable mmm. And as some mentioned it could be sharper here and there... as in seeing skin details is just a plus for such a shot :] Still +8/8