Beautiful work! I like a lot her skin... is very soft and good use of lightning too. Nice detail in the hand and necklace.

The left eye looks a little weird. +9
Saludos!!

Your best work anatomy wise. Composition is great. I'd like to see you colors a bit more. +8

anatomy seems right , lighting is nice
painting is well done nice work +8

Good work. Me gusta su pose y expresión. Buena composición y ambiebtación. +8

alebrije: Thank yo so much! it was a lot of work, specially on the hand.

slickgreekgeo: Thanks dude! I apologize for forgetting to mention you helped me out a lot with this one

blackshad: Thanks!

deManuel: Muchas gracias!

You're becoming better form one piece to another.
Good anatomy and face.

+8

Well done in general, only concern is that lower portion feels awkard. Awkward in that it she seems slightly off balance resting against the wall, perhaps its' just the way that green sheet is positioned in relation to her.

Although very beautiful, you signature kind of distracts... maybe too big, and at the worng place, I usually put it at the lower rigth corner of the piece, but that's a personal choice. The face of the woman looks somewhat weird, unnatural. It's perhaps too small compared to the res of the body. The body proportions seem okay for me other than that. This is a very good painting anyway, good work!

agree with crazyboy about the face being a tad smaller in proportion. But good work on the hand !! Good work overall !!

TheKing78: Do you really think so? Wow, thank you! George (slickgreekgeo) told me the same about the anatomy, haha. Thanks!

loneorbit: she was supposed to be sat down on a kind of table. Thanks for the advice!

Crazyboy: Thanks! And sorry for the signature, I was desperated to get it done haha. About the face, I see what I can do with my next painting.

dakoo: Thank you. I think is the best hand I will ever paint.

I can see where shadows would make this more convincinly 3- but there is a rawness to this I like without that is consistant with the rest of your painting. It has a soft classical feel. Well done.

especially dig the reflection on the mirror. very well done =)

A truly lovely job.
I like the lighting also.
+10

You're getting better,obviously. But her anatomy is off.
Nice work on face and hair.
I don't really understand the concept - probably I'm missing something.
I like your gentle style. Work on anatomy and keep it up

Wonderful work¡¡¡¡¡+10

seeThrou: Yes... sometimes I cannot see where shadows are needed, but it's all about practice. Thanks!

leloops: haha that reflection gave me lots of problems but I think I fixed it. Thanks!

cupcake: Thank you!

curlyhair: Ha you're the first one saying that. I always consider a lot your feedback, I know what you're talking about. Thanks for everything!

beatrizmatar: Thank you!

you are very talented, i enjoy your work.

good work, i see some minor anatomy errors, such as the shoulder being a tad bit too big and her breasts seem a little off. but other than that no crits at all. lighting's great, color theme is great, the subject's face is lovely, the background & clothes are great too

yep, i agree about her anatomy and a little bit of shading... but i love the expressions of her eyes and color! ^^, good work!

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cnell: Thank you! ^^

Obscured: your feedback is so useful... thanks!

ronn: thanks! it is always nice to hear critiques like yours

i see a lot of progress here, dude
overall anatomy looks a lot better than in your other works. i really like the way you made her hand. her left arm is looking a bit flat though, mainly because there's a bit too much light
her facial features are a bit man-like, but its not such a big bother
overall idea is to get a bit more volumes to it
but its a very good progress

Thank you Cigaro, greetings!

Nice unique composition. The only thing I notice is the awkward cropping of the left foot. The pic would feel more complete if we could see all of the girl, but that's all I notice in terms of that. The face is very lovely, and I like the overall mood of the piece! Gook work!!

I love her position
Well done on colours and lighting, also anatomy
+10
Rae