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Heartbreaker

Heartbreaker

Painting Painting \ Figure | 11/21/06 @423 | Pirotess | Comments critiques (18) | Views views (1859)


Heartbreaker
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"The love, those suddenly develops, heals most heavily." (Jean de La Bruyère)


you broke my heart divide
said we are close friends
will be it forever
couldn't imagine to be without me
believed you

you wanted to be there for me
I made a mistake
now I smile tears away
you lied

finally replaced me
my fault
was too anxious to take my chance
I was so blind

_____________________________________________________

Music among others: Billy Talent "The Ex", Bullet for my Valentine "Room 409"...


well... I quit counting the hours I was sitting on that. it was hard for me to do this because I proposed to myself a designated target and I wanted it to look like I imagined. I learned a lot during the painting process btw. ;)

took some reference pictures from me with my cell phone photocam for the pose, my hand, some refs are linked and other refs were, what my mirror gave me ;)

done with a wacom graphire, most parts in painter, some parts in ps cs2.
c&c welcome as always, hope you like it :)
 
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Avatar Kelandra

 11/21/06 @692

very nice work! Sad and melancholy mood...I like the red fingernails. A small crit would be add some shadow underneath her hair-clip so it doensn't look like it's floating on her hair. Great job!
 
Avatar Daykan

 11/22/06 @061

very nice concept!
 
Avatar deManuel

 11/22/06 @493

Good work. Very expressive. +8
 
Avatar MiyakoToudaiji

 11/22/06 @501

Finally you did it :)
I love it! Its great!!!!!


But where are the Ref Photos with you and your Cellphone?
 
Avatar Pirotess

 11/22/06 @532

thank you all, I'm very happy you like it ^_^

@kelandra: i already add a shadow, but i think i will add some more, because now i think you're right, it's too decent. thank you :)

@miyako: they are still in my phone =P well i will see, what i can do to get them on my pc to post them, too ;)
 
Avatar slickgreekgeo

 11/22/06 @540

Simple, but works great. I'd like to see you push skin tones a bit more.
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 11/22/06 @770

Very nice work. Her face is well done. I think as George said you could push the skin tones a bit and add a bit of shade under the chin area so it has more depth. Love her eye.
 
Avatar ronn

 11/23/06 @108

what very nice drama effect! i love the expression of her eye, i'm not liking the tears though it looks a bit unnatural, (i am aware of the tears mixing with make up), also the shadow under her fingers need to be more precise and the shadow on her neck under her right arm, it's looks too coally/dark compared to the rest of her skin tone maybe a mix with a darker shade of her skin tone would help. Also if you can desaturate the color of her hair a little like the color of her eyebrow. But what i really like about this painting is her tattoo and definitely... the model! overall good work, i'm giving you 8/10!

p.s. i hope my comment is not too harsh, anyway it's all my opinion though! hope to see more of your work and thanks for sharing! ^^,

  • ronn
 
Avatar rubenmontecinos

 11/30/06 @807

I like the illustration...nice
 
Avatar jameswolf

 12/18/06 @059

nice eyes, :)
 
Avatar CreativeSchism

 12/26/06 @726

I'm not sure if this was meant to represent her but I instanty thought of the comic character "Dawn"! Very nice work!
 
Avatar PeterGrave5

 12/30/06 @903

the object in the hair appears to be just suspended there, i always try to block part of something out when i stick it in hair..weave it in there...helps get rid of that weird perspective...

otherwise this is the strongest image in your gallery.
 
Avatar cupcake

 01/26/07 @700

Lovely:)
+9
 
Avatar Pirotess

 01/27/07 @531

thank you all so much :)
 
Avatar blackshad

 02/10/07 @795

the face is well done
you are on the right way keep it up :)
+8
 
Avatar LillianaS

 06/26/07 @353

This is the nicest in your gallery i think. The hair clip does need some shadow work, or like suggested above add some hair around it to eliminate this effect.
I don't know, but i like the tatoo on her shoulder, but it seems to make her shoulder seem very wide and flat... Beautiful image!
 
Avatar Zazill

 07/18/07 @453

Very cool pic, i like the expression as well. Yeah
 
Avatar Pirotess

 07/19/07 @473

thank you! :)

@LillianaS: yes, I think I will add some more shadows. and perhaps make it a little bit bigger. thank you :)
 
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