Nicely composed high contrast portrait. I like the effect of the light on her face – the subtle tones defining mouth, nose, eyes etc, give it a ‘far away’ feel.
Could maybe consider cropping from the right a little(?) – the dead space behind her head doesn’t seem to be adding to the compo and the deeper textures there are a little distracting… also it would move the face out of the centre of the composition and give her a (proportionally) larger area to look into - thus emphasising the direction of her gaze, and increasing the feeling that there’s a story going on behind the picture.

The blown out face is gone to far, no nose profile lips are almost gone and eye lashes on bottom are also gone.. you need to pull back some detail in these areas.
Background is messy.. nice model possible reshoot..

Beautiful model!!....a little overexposed....agree abot bg being distracting.
Carlos

Just wanted to say the same. Overexposed. But still nice capture +6/10

Nice mood, a little bit overexposed indeed, but I love the expression
+7/10

unfortunately it is overexposed, would be a good shot!
agree with the others about the background.

keep trying.

Greets Lenny