Very nice. Seems like a peaceful place.

Why private comments...
A mistake?

Edit:
Nice fall composition! Love those trees and the lonely feel.

oops.

Very nice,
I would like to see a close up of the slide.

Pretty shot, but i agree with cupcake about a closer up of the slide...its so tiny, that it sort of looks like a toy

wow vwery nice shot... interesting composition and great colours!

cupcake and MidnightAngel: Thanks for your kind words. Considering your interest in seeing slide closer up, I'll post others of this series sooner than later.
VioletContact: Thanks.

Very nice shot Brian.

Great composition and I think the distance
to the slide works fine for me

Great diagonals in the shawdows counterbalancing the focalpoint
somewhat on the left side of the image

+ 9

Beautiful scenery. I like slide as it is now - it looks forgotten/abandoned and adds to the autumn's sad mood. On the other hand colors are bright and there is light from the sun so it's not too sad . Perfect photo for "end of summer" .

+7/7

I like the composition. The slide looks kind of lonely and forgotten which matches your description nicely.
Don

Nice shot. The tree on the left works well to frame the picture. I also like the unusual shape of the tree on the right.
This shot has an interesting narrative, as it shows the slide as an element that breaks the vertical pattern provided by the trees.
Now, show us your other pictures.

The lighting is wonderful!!....very nice colors!.....Very good composition and sensation of solitude.
Well done Brian!
Carlos

yeah, nice composition ! great colors ! nice work !

erdi

Nice capture Brain!
Good composition and lovely colors.
Like the scene, the absence.
Well done

Wallace: Thanks, you've pretty much nailed what my goal was behind this image.
ahwayakchih: Indeed this scene can be viewed as forgotten and/ or end of season, which makes one ponder why has it become forgotten over time? Thanks for your comments.
workster: Thanks.
ZedoCaixao: Thanks, a narrative? didn't think that while taking this, but it makes sense.
Madanapale: Solitude now that fits this scene nicely as well. Thanks for such enthusiastic words, appreciate it.
padrino: Thanks.
Dutch-Memory: Thanks.

Totall agree with Wallace about the use of distance & the way shadows work !!!

nice picture
you are improving dude, im happy to see that hehe
great colors, composition and angle are ok
no major crits
+8

dakoo: Thanks.
blackshad: Thanks, I appreciate your strong critiques.

very nice shot... well done

i really like the colors. composition is great too. i like the fact that there's that slide there. gives the picture a lot of volume

oldskool87: Thanks.
Obscured: Good point. Usually I would take this as a landscape, but the openness of this setting fit well into portrait. Thanks.

Very beautiful shot! The colors and composition are great!
It has also a touch of loneliness in it...

anastasia: I appreciate how you've noted the loneliness of this park setting.

wish i could walk there.. lay on the ground and watche the stars and feel the wind on my skin..
Beautiful place.

ParanoidChild: Thanks, it is such a beautiful place odd that its' been left to nature.

hmm somerhing tells me i want a black and white version

A very nice and fresh range of colours. Good composition too.