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Photography Photography \ Figure | 03/16/07 @017 | vprivat | Comments critiques (33) | Views views (739)


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São Pedro Beach
São Paulo
Brazil
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Canon Digital Rebel XTi 400D
75-300mm USM Lens
  • Shutter Speed: 1/800
  • Aperture Value: 5.6
  • ISO Speed: 200
  • Focal Length: 300.0 mm
 
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Avatar JeffMD

 03/16/07 @043

nice shot! i'm not good in photography, but i find the waves on the right side a little too bright IMO. 7/8
 
Avatar Wallace

 03/16/07 @045

Nice dynamic shot!

As mentioned the waves seem a bit overexposed,
also some cropping on the left and right side would make this image more tight IMO

Have you tried to make it black&white? could be interesting;)

Overall its a nice and entertaining piece

+ 9
 
Avatar Poohblah

 03/16/07 @053

Very cool! The subject is a bit too centered for me.
 
Avatar Inabottle

 03/16/07 @099

Ok I cant tell, the monitors on the ship suck... but Id say a lil more details in your whites might be nice... I believe the detail is there just needs to be brought out a lil... other than that nice dynamic shot and great facial expression.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 03/16/07 @124

Excellent timing and great capture!!
Glad to see another one from you.....I am posting a message to you.
A slight lower exposure would reveal more details on the waves.
Carlos
 
Avatar vprivat

 03/16/07 @143

Ok.. Thanks all for C&C.

I just edited the photo, tried to bring more details on waves... And added a Grayscale version...

Thanks!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 03/16/07 @209

Sure looks better Victor!
Carlos
 
Avatar ToKra

 03/16/07 @584

Nice Shot! :)
 
Avatar cupcake

 03/16/07 @633

Good work Victor!!!
 
Avatar Tae

 03/16/07 @700

It makes me want to go surfing!
 
Avatar blackshad

 03/16/07 @746

exposure was mentionned already
other than that, a bettre cropping maybe?
rest is great :) +8
 
Avatar Slapo

 03/16/07 @781

Would prefer it to have more space on the right and less on the left... but that's probably just me.
Nice sharpness, but Carlos does have a good point about the exposure.
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 03/16/07 @828

Very dynamic photograph. Nice energy
 
Avatar anastasia

 03/16/07 @907

Nice sharpness! Beautiful action photography!
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 03/17/07 @041

As been mentioned, slightly overexposed but good capture of the action. I might have tried to put the figure a bit higher and to the left.
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 03/17/07 @144

the left is perfect, the only way to improve this would have been to get more room on the right..
Perfect timing..
 
Avatar Sammie

 03/17/07 @322

great action shot!
His cheeks are even blown up from the heavy breathing while he rides the rush of the wave.

Nice sports capture
very sharp
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/17/07 @445

Nice capture Victor!

I agree that it's a tad over-exposed. Anytime I'm shooting surf in bright sun I step down at least by 1/2 and sometimes more to prevent over-exposure of the foam. Try using exposure bracketing if your camera offers that feature. I think the surfer is too centered her. I'd also prefer it if he were more to the left and maybe even up toward the upper left corner a bit.

Michelle
 
Avatar PJClapp

 03/17/07 @778

Nice work, its nice seeing the grey scale to go along with it. I dont know it mite be cool to see alittle bit more cropped off the top and bottum, but then again im a letter box junky
 
Avatar SandraS

 03/17/07 @873

great shot! Nice to see you posting again! I bet it must be difficult taking these shots of surfers. Will we see a shot of you in the same action one day? ;) I hope.
 
Avatar vprivat

 03/17/07 @881

Thanks all for comments and critiques...

I apreciate..

Sandra.. I just need to find a friend who can take some pics from me :)
But then I wont post on my gfx... Cuz I cant surf and take shots at the same time.. But I will share with you! :)
 
ajitm

 03/18/07 @288

Great Shot !!!
 
Avatar moserArtist

 03/18/07 @311

All the constructive critics has been mentioned.
Positioning of the surfer in the composition (off center, towards the left).
Slightly overexposure as also mentioned by a few.

Still a very nice action shot at the right time!
 
Avatar ARTOONATOR

 03/18/07 @589

Good shot!
For the dynamics you could make a panorama out of this.
 
Avatar dakoo

 03/18/07 @958

agree with all that is said above !!
Including the gr8 timing on this shot !! :)
 
Avatar painfulneck

 03/20/07 @202

great capture of the action and in motion.. i would try one of these! this is very nice..
 
Avatar EideticImage

 03/20/07 @297

You've really captured the intensity and frozen a great moment in time ^^ great shot
 
Avatar ClaraSoto

 03/21/07 @103

It looks very good to me!!!! There is passion in the surfer and of course in the photographer!!!! neat details and great timeing!!
 
Avatar Martin777

 03/21/07 @553

Great colors, exposition and focus. I'd prefer not centre composition only.
 
Avatar vanamont

 03/23/07 @867

very good shot...full motion...well done
 
Avatar Repercutir

 03/24/07 @122

impressive capture!
 
Avatar Binotti

 03/24/07 @341

Nice shot!
Brazil rocks!
I was from there
curti
flw
 
Avatar ZissorS

 03/24/07 @976

Nice one
 
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  Victor Cespon Privat
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  12/11/1984 (23)
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