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I understand the question, but what seems to be the problem?

I understand the question, but what seems to be the problem?

Painting Painting \ Uncategorized | 04/23/07 @283 | kayness | Comments critiques (65) | Views views (4434)


I understand the question, but what seems to be the problem?
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I've been wanting to do an Asian 'femme fatale' type, with a qipao and gun ina noir-ish setting for a while now. earlier attempts just failed! i couldn't get anything right. This is my third try(and no i dont' want to show what the earlier ones look like :p). She ended up looking Eurasian rather than Asian, though. Ah well.

<b>edit</b>: cropped the top a bit and enlarged the head as suggested...thanks!
 
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Avatar MertAcar

 04/23/07 @286

Great work kayness! I also like closeups;) +9
Mert
 
Avatar sodawax

 04/23/07 @316

Very nice work... I likes! :)
 
Avatar Halcyonic

 04/23/07 @322

very nice work, lighting is great (thumbup)
 
Avatar Rafsan

 04/23/07 @329

Excellent work, good use of references without copying them to much.
I think her head is a bit to small for her body and the neck to long.
Personally I would crop a bit on top..+8
 
Avatar razpna

 04/23/07 @329

not your best i think ,but if i don`t know what you can -excellent work
 
Avatar BillCorbett

 04/23/07 @409

As I said on DA.. Sweet!
 
Avatar APGRR

 04/23/07 @431

Very nice work (thumbup)
 
Avatar ersen-t

 04/23/07 @483

great lighting and colors.
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 04/23/07 @559

Cool work!
great character, cool style, cool colors, cool light :)
I like it +10
 
Avatar JeffMD

 04/23/07 @567

wow! you are really good at textile details! i admire the way you do it! top marks!
 
Avatar alebrije

 04/23/07 @639

Another good work!
A beautiful lady killer.
Nice colors and expression! (thumbup) +10
 
Avatar Lisbeth

 04/23/07 @686

nice mood !
 
Avatar Wallace

 04/23/07 @707

great colours!

Nice pose and mood
as mentioned I think her face is a tid bit too small

otherwise this is a nice work of art

+ 9
 
Avatar Madanapale

 04/23/07 @715

Wonderful work!......Great work!.....well done Kay!
Top marks!
Carlos
 
Avatar Papalagi

 04/23/07 @724

Very cool (thumbup)
 
Avatar Daykan

 04/23/07 @773

wowwwwwwwww Kay!!!! I´ts amazing!!!!!! Love the colours and all!!
 
Avatar Kadary

 04/23/07 @807

Great work. Her expression is rather blank, but it works very well for a killer.
 
Avatar kayness

 04/23/07 @820

thank you so much everyone!!!

update: cropped a bit and enlarged the head a bit as Rafsan, Wallce etc has suggested...thanks!
 
Avatar Pie

 04/23/07 @947

I really love the dress and the flowers on the screen.. you really have a talent for fabrics..
 
Avatar Inabottle

 04/24/07 @169

Sexy and dangerous, I wish the gone looked a lil better, but its very well done love the composition and lighting nice.
 
Avatar jha

 04/24/07 @212

beautiful painting
 
Avatar sdavis75

 04/24/07 @499

Beautiful work. Very impressive. +10
 
Avatar Foxie

 04/24/07 @610

beautiful!
Good job! :)
 
Avatar Simbel

 04/24/07 @700

I love this one!! wonderful colors!
 
Avatar ADY

 04/24/07 @739

Like it! +9/9 ;)
 
Avatar CreativeSchism

 04/24/07 @788

I love your color scheme and comp! Would like to see more of her eyes I think, but you did a great job on this!
 
Avatar deManuel

 04/24/07 @808

Impressive composition, colors and atmosphere. Love her expression. :) +10
 
Avatar DarkShiva

 04/24/07 @912

Amazing :)
 
Avatar Excorbac

 04/24/07 @929

Hi Kay C.
Nearly everything's so well done ! I agree with JeffMD : excellent technique with this satin clothes. Good lighting too. However, I found a little problem with her right ankle and foot which are way too slim, IMO.
I would have not stained her legs with blood because it spoils her kinda dignity and coldness. And I think her gun is too big, you should have prefered a more 'feminine' gun.
+7/8 anyway
 
Avatar Sangimber

 04/25/07 @547

I love it...fabrics nicely done, like this style
 
Avatar tomato04

 04/25/07 @852

great work =D i like the dress very much, and the lips are beautiful :)
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 04/26/07 @066

Very nice work indeed. my only problem would be the gun. i think it could use more work... I know how guns can be a pain in the arse! Everything else looks cool :0
 
Avatar blackrobin

 04/26/07 @206

absolutely great artwork :)
yea the gun should be made more feminine, it would made a large effect on the picture
if i may add tips to make a character(female) more asian : when you do the eyes imagine looking into clear water with soothing feel, lips should not be too full or too sexy, and face bone structures are softer or less visible
narrow eyes helps alot too
 
Avatar Sharkh20

 04/26/07 @256

Absolutely love this. I missed so many good things when i was away! Anyways awesome job. Her left arm around her elbow bugs me a little though. Also that gun is a little funky looking and looks like it might explode if she tried to fire it :) you might want to study some firearm anatomy. Sorry had to give some kind of crit. Top marks though
 
Avatar kayness

 04/26/07 @663

thanks everyone for the comment!
 
Avatar bakatron

 04/26/07 @721

oooooooooh!

i finally finally finally got the chance to check your stuff out and its like OMG BOOM !!!
 
Avatar thomasM

 04/26/07 @803

beautiful amazing work
just the gun looks a little bit lik not fitting to the rest with its dark outlines and and it`s colours
7/7
 
Avatar azkul

 04/27/07 @320

Very nice. She's beautiful.

Brian
The Lens Flare
 
Avatar cnell

 04/27/07 @538

i would love to be able to draw like this. you did a great job of creating a dramatic mood. i learned a lot form the comments. love your work, keep them coming, Kay!
  • claudia
 
Avatar ViolentContact

 04/27/07 @799

Your work is excellent. Lighting, amount of details and mood just perfect :) and she looks nice, great work! +10 from me for sure
 
Avatar Apofiss

 04/28/07 @728

Beautiful work! +
 
Avatar kayness

 04/29/07 @051

wow,thanks so much everyone :hug:!!!!! sweet gfx people
 
DfwMonkie

 04/29/07 @334

very nice !
 
Avatar lusie

 04/29/07 @396

cool... very very beautiful... :) and interesting idea .... +10
 
Avatar Jewel

 04/30/07 @062

Wow! beautiful work!!!
love the dress and the colours!
 
Avohej

 04/30/07 @801

very nice keep it up
 
Avatar MauroCancino

 05/01/07 @109

i love her pose... max for u !!! +9/9
 
Avatar dragon4lunch

 05/01/07 @164

She looks great. I do think however, the gun should have pointed slightley to the left, thus showing it better. It does not read too well right now.
 
Avatar Azurelle

 05/01/07 @783

Hello kay, sorry I am writing so late.
This truely is a wonderful painting, I am honestly fighting for it to get an Fantasyana Art Award ;)
However, good luck with the elite voting!! :)
 
Avatar JESR

 05/01/07 @943

awesome character design i like the illumination effects and her face expression. +10/10
 
Avatar Pipertim

 05/02/07 @433

I like the paten in dress
 
Avatar soheil

 05/04/07 @999

VerY perfecT and ...Fresh stylE . Nice +10+ :)
 
Avatar kayness

 05/04/07 @186

thanks so much everyone!
 
Avatar OnPix-Artist

 05/05/07 @480

Beautiful !
 
Avatar woodencorpse

 05/09/07 @028

Really nice! I love it!
 
Avatar NunoDias

 05/12/07 @221

So sexy...the gun is a perfect touch!!the blood wonderfull...love the concept!!
 
Avatar jetboy

 05/17/07 @740

Sexy, brilliantly painted and the composition and colours are perfect, great work!
 
Avatar Rita

 05/18/07 @579

TOTALLY beautiful!
 
floating

 05/19/07 @684

it seems like you drew yourself :) very beautiful anyway!!!!!!!!!
 
Avatar Cigaro

 05/19/07 @701

Sexy chicks who carry guns will always be cool ;)
 
Avatar Gavade

 05/21/07 @780

NICE!
 
Avatar LillianaS

 06/25/07 @413

I agree about her elbow, overall i LOVE the colour pallet. Its excellent! Her expression is real nice, and i love how to whole piece come together.
 
Avatar LoStSidE

 07/31/07 @889

sexy... :)
 
Huldra

 01/05/08 @077

Good title, good painting :)
 
KaTeRiEnA

 01/24/08 @951

LoL! I LovE ThiS PiEcE AnD ThE TiTlE! *^_^*
 
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