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you shall not pass 3.0

you shall not pass 3.0

Painting Painting \ Figure | 07/26/07 @049 | JeffMD | Comments critiques (16) | Views views (1581)


you shall not pass 3.0
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edit: made changes added the lamp.

made another character trying out this time a different color which I dont usually use. Did mattepainting for the rocks and stairs.

crits and comments are welcome!
 
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Avatar ARZILLIER66

 07/26/07 @093

Cool work Jeffrey!
:)
nice character and pose :)
 
Avatar TheKing78

 07/26/07 @249

The bg is fantastic!
The character has a good pose and armour, the only thing I think it's strange is the lightsource because we can see the moon behind the character but she seems enlighted from the front.
Anyway it's not simple to render a character in that conditions of light.

+8
 
Avatar kunkunlanak

 07/26/07 @429

Hey Jeff!! this one is another awesome piece from U, maybe would like more with some more light in her face, however another masterpiece! 9P
 
Avatar Diane

 07/26/07 @439

Very nice work! I agree with TheKing78 about the lighting though. I think that the thighs/legs are too big. The shadow on the right part of her belly is a little bit too dark, it doesn't look natural. She has a nice armour :)
+8/10
 
Avatar JeffMD

 07/26/07 @556

arzillier - many thanks!

theking - many thanks! was trying to portray another light source from the front but I guess wasnt able to portray it very well. thanks for bringing that up! added few touches to it.

xanti - Many thanks to you again and for your input.

Diane - Many thanks too! tried to make adjustments hope I made it right.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 07/26/07 @701

Beautiful work!....great details and colors!
Carlos
 
Avatar ersen-t

 07/26/07 @748

great work.
nice colors and details.
 
Avatar lires

 07/26/07 @784

wow! ganda! nice work..^_^ i think they're wrong about the light source.. i think the reason why there is light in front is because of the lamp.. haha! mga engots!
 
Avatar Daykan

 07/26/07 @887

Jeff dude!!! Amazing work!!!! WOW! YouŽll can be a master in short time!!!
 
Avatar Cloister

 07/26/07 @895

Brave pose, and interesting mood. I like the furthest parts of the background a lot. The skin of the girl is a little plastical imo. Perhaps a bigger variation of colour would make it come alive even more.. I like how the muscles on the belly twists. I might also be a good idea to seperate some other detail colourwise from the background, to prevent her from sticking out too much. Great job with the birds also (both in shape and positioning).
 
Avatar alebrije

 07/26/07 @936

Like a lot the character, the clothes and the pose...
but I think the background needs a little more profundity... I feel it a little flat.
 
Avatar slickgreekgeo

 07/27/07 @967

Definitely one of your best images. The only problem is the values of the background, they don't blend well with the foreground. Try creating a new layer, set it to color, and desaturate it so you can see how your values are working. Other than that, the composition, figure, and color palette are extraordinary.

+10
 
Avatar JeffMD

 07/27/07 @004

carlos , ersen - man thanks!

lires - maraming salamat!

Daykan - Many thanks and also for your inspiring words, gives me more strength to study and pactice more to become one.

cloister - many thanks. as skin is still my weakness, ill work on it more and also the colours.

alebrijie - many thanks!

George - Many thanks! thanks too for pointing that out and giving me the technique and quick fix. made few tweaks with the BG,hope this one works now.
 
Avatar Claeng

 07/27/07 @062

Nice painting. The saturation seems abit high on the pink armor and green ribbon compared to the rest and her pose feels quite stiff. The background is really cool.
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 07/27/07 @073

Beautiful work!! I do think her stance seems a bit awkward.
 
Avatar blackshad

 07/27/07 @895

you are getting better dude
this is exellent stuff, its beautiful
some lighting problems have been mentionned thought :)
well done +9
 
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