Echo

Painting \ Figure | 10/20/07 @020 | whatwillthisfix | critiques (7) | views (550)

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I am your thought but the water is amnesia.
My name is on the tip of your tongue,
My image is slipping,
but your memory is gripping it.
This is my breath in your lungs.

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Comments (7)

mamoun

10/20/07 @079

Really nice

Cool

I like it

Redredwine

10/20/07 @126

O.K....You did not ask for suggestions. Like the water.

ersen-t

10/20/07 @605

nice work.
the wings and the water are good.

Madanapale

10/20/07 @766

A little tight at the top....may look better closer to a diagonal composition.
Nice lighting and mood!
Carlos

Daykan

10/20/07 @835

Beautiful scene. Really you need a bit more work in anatomy and composition. Idea it´s nice, and colours too.

Vaisak

10/22/07 @446

I agree with Daykan. But you managed to transmit a feeling of sadness, and that counts as much or even more.

herrwestphal

11/18/07 @792

I agree with Daykan. Nice work!

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