Parsnip Wizard

Painting \ Uncategorized | 10/19/07 @491 | Rory | critiques (3) | views (214)

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Hello
I have been learning to draw and paint(digitally) for the last 12 months and need some crits on my work.
These images are part of a series for a monthly flyer promoting a club night.
I feel I'm now at the stage where I need to put some work on the internet and get some honest feedback as so far my work has been distributed only in flyer form in my hometown.

I would really like to hear any opinions you have on these works

You can also find some more images on my website at http://www.rorydoona.com

Tools used are: pencil, photoshop cs2 and illustrator cs2

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Comments (3)

Zazill

10/19/07 @527

Hold it there Rory, don't post so many on one day ..... if u do people will most likely skip you altogether. Rather post one a week, that way you'll get more C&C.
You should also give info on how long you took to make this and what were you aiming for.
Now for the image : The image is good but i don't know (can't make out) what the pink stuff is. i suggest rather make a set of hills here with these potato things. Another thing is i can't find the focus point.... ... i'm assuming you've already taken the effects of atmosphere(like haze) into account... try to focus on that more as well ..... oh yeah one last thing... .. .. to get more people to C&C your work you should also make an effort to C&C them, savvy

Chheers

thomasM

10/19/07 @771

nice wok
i like the warm atmosphere

jawine

11/08/07 @610

Cute, could use some more contrast between light/shadow and tones, it is all a bit the same looking now, which makes it very flat.

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