DogFight

Drawing \ Figure | 12/08/07 @572 | Windfall | critiques (13) | views (539)

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Hi All,

Back again. Thanks to everyone who has been leaving comments!

This one took about a week, after work and the weekend.

Hope you like, as always, please critique.

--- Here is version 2. I changed the background to try and add more contrast between it and the monster. Also I added a little bit of a shadow to try to ground the people.

Tell me what you think!

The original version is here:
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa1/Windfall_01/dog_fight.jpg

Which one is better?

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Comments (13)

KJMalings

12/08/07 @619

The anatomy of this piece is very good, I really like the hand pointing at the beasts face. However I think that the contrast in the "softness" of your brush is distracting. In addition to that I think that you could really make this great if you added some more complementary colors, I think it would really make it pop. I really like your figures positions, they show tons of action, but i think your background doesn't ground them. Maybe you could try to do like a solid color with just a touch of shadow. What i like most about this is your really strong focal point, the position of your figures and the detail of the beasts face (especially the mouth) really draw the viewer in.

hope I could be some help
K.J.Malings

Daykan

12/08/07 @803

Great idea, cool character design! KJ said some details taht i´m agree. Good work!

Roadrunner

12/08/07 @810

Brave young lady.

Great character design, expression, anatomy and composition.

The guns look kind of primitive for fighting such a beast.

Good job.

Edit: I think this background is better. The dark colour of the beast needed a brighter background.

Windfall

12/08/07 @948

Thanks to all for the critiques.

K.J Thanks very much. I'm still trying to get comfortable with color and your advice is exactly the kind of critique I need!

KJMalings

12/09/07 @121

wow, that looks really good, I am glad I could help. I think your background gives your figures even more motion.

K.J.Malings

MaiteGoitia

12/11/07 @900

Interesting work!

Redredwine

12/12/07 @087

Love the beast, the colors and texture. The girl, weapons, a little more work, imo.

thomasM

12/12/07 @456

good work
your use of blurry and not blurry scenes i very nice

artgrader

12/14/07 @013

The colors are great! possibly could use a little more detail on the charcters. It still seems a bit unfinshed to me.

Maidith

12/15/07 @878

Nicely done, very dynamic work. The light on the fur is beautiful, a very nice touch.

velvetta

12/17/07 @821

good sense of perspective and anatomy, but the coloring is too rough and smudgy. I think you shuold work with a better resolution, and try to make the colors more influenced one another.

Windfall

12/18/07 @015

Great critiques. Thanks everyone!

Gianna23

12/26/07 @936

The beaset is really well done!. I agree about the softness being a bit too pronounced. This is a good action pic.

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