"Against Light......"

Photography \ Uncategorized | 03/24/08 @684 | Audri | critiques (4) | views (210)

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Cox's Bazar Sea Beach, Bangladesh.

(updated as per helpful suggestions. Thanks!)

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Byonder

03/24/08 @696

See review.

moserArtist

03/24/08 @834

I think you should have waited a little more for a less strong sun.

Ideally you could have removed a few of the people on the beach and had your main character slightly off center (again)!

purplerose

03/25/08 @558

Lovely photo. I like the mood presented by the lighting; may be a bit too strong though.

Could fare better as a Black & White.

Would crop off the sky to balance the composition.

Audri

03/26/08 @801

Thanks Byonder for the review.

Patrick, is this any better than before now?

Jerrica here is the Black & White version

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Byonder

01/01/70 @947

Concept:

Average

Technical Skill:

Weak

Impact/impression:

Weak

Pros:

Interesting spectacle. Almost looks like a human tree of sorts
Light Vs. Dark 3 looks the best

Cons:

Over-exposure and under-exposure are a bit too harsh to look intentional
Could use some more space on the bottom, so as not to cut off the figure's foot
Central composition is a bit bland

Overall opinion/feedback:

This looks like it was a tough shot to expose correctly. You're trying to work against the back lighting, which could work out nicely for a silhouette, except that the background doesn't really suit it. For a good silhouette the background should be more or less empty, otherwise the figure ends up competing with it.

Keep shooting and experimenting

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GFXuser name:

Audri
Full Name:
  Tania Shukrana
Gender:
  Female
Birthdate:
  08/16/1977 (31)
Country:
  Bangladesh
Member since:
  05/28/2004

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