Great work JESR. The eyes are really great, the hair and the face shape is good too. I think the structure of the face is alittle off though - probably the lips too far to the left and the shading on her nose.

But it's nice work. I love the ornament in her hair and the details of the hair itself!

Rae

Beautiful pencil work
The gap between the eyes and bottom of the nose is too long and off centre
Keep up the good work

It's a decent drawing, but i think if you put as much effort of observation into the rest of the work as you did into the eyes then they would really become stunning. The eyes are beautiful, they are alive. And i've noticed that with you other drawings - and i think you have too as all your thumbnails are the eyes, but the rest of the drawing looks incomplete in comparison

Great hair!

The hair and eyes look great!
Rest is allready mentioned

really good effort - a bit more attention to the basics as mentioned and theres gonna be no stopping you.

well its been a long time and i gotta say - man youve improved. keep it up.

The drawing shows a lot of work and it's almost there.. I agree with MePhistoZor about the eyes. It also looks like a magazine picture was used as a reference base? Fashion mags in particular are notorious for distorting images (eyes, nose, lips, necks) which look (natural?) in print but often loose the illusion when converted to a drawing.

Really nice portrait. love the rendering on the head scarf and eyes.

I think the face could use better contrast because it looks a bit flat right now.

Rendering on the hair could use more work to give it a "flowing" feeling.

+7

Very nice portrait.. Good

Very nice drawing!

Her Eyes are Lovely

Very nice drawing!.....may need more shadows.
Carlos

the shading of the face is a little bit flat.. but the rest is ok

a great drawing...though it looks like the paper fought the drawing a bit....