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.homework II

Photography Photography \ Abstract | 05/09/08 @458 | oldskool87 | Comments critiques (15) | Views views (257)


.homework II
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work done for school... the task was balance... we had to created/take 10 images that had a balanced composition... we could use dods, lines, surfaces, objects, persones, light sources, shadowed parts and so on...

also see .homework by  oldskool87 a.k.a. me :p


Camera: Nikon D80 + Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6
Shutter Speed: 1/320 sec
F-Stop: f/5.6
ISO: 320
Focal lenght: 135.00 mm
Flash: Did not fire
 
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Avatar Vasco

 05/09/08 @658

I like it, but I'm not sure it's the best example for your homework! I also think that a focal point should be exactly on the circular thing and I think it's a bit upper. Still as an abstract it works, try it in B&W
 
Avatar androx3k

 05/09/08 @669

I like this experiment. I agree with Vasco but I also like the DOF of this picture.
But I'm curious to know about your teacher judgment.
IMO all the objects are the upper half of the pictur, so it feels everything falling down ahead.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 05/09/08 @708

Very good composition and nice use of selective focus.!
Good work Alin!
Carlos
 
Avatar LiddleLarsen

 05/10/08 @965

Agree with Vasco on this, but one other point.... I like that its different :) Well done
 
Avatar oldskool87

 05/10/08 @033

thanks all :)

@  androx3k: this was one of his favorites from the 10 pictures i took ;)
 
Avatar workster

 05/10/08 @774

I like the composition and DOF.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 05/10/08 @814

Good subject and composition. I find the over-exposure of the focal part (and some areas around it) a bit distracting.
 
Avatar Jafus

 05/11/08 @011

Really like the compostion & dof!!
well done:)
 
Avatar moserArtist

 05/11/08 @513

Nice experiment! :)
 
Avatar cupcake

 05/11/08 @807

Good work.:)
 
Avatar zaclab

 06/03/08 @627

Nice work!
 
Avatar dullboy-d

 06/09/08 @562

Great angles and focuschoice. +7/7
 
Avatar twistoflime

 06/11/08 @758

Great composition, great eye.
 
Avatar RvascoF

 07/02/08 @982

Great compo and DOF, well done....!!!
 
Avatar killadore

 07/16/08 @474

great work, if you ask me! i love the tones and DOF. the composition's cool too, gives it a semi-abstract feel
 
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