a nice first piece. the mouth looks weird to me and the hand griping the sword have too much light and no dept making it look fat. between her leg looks a bit odd, i think the skin goes off too far and what is that white line for? think u might want to add another moon to the shirt.

Wow, nice pic! She's pretty, her hair is very well done and her outfit is unique. The picture as a whole reminds me of game art. ^_^ I only have the tiniest nitpicks. Teka makes some good points, though I see the white line on her leg is from the backlighting. Perhaps soften that a bit so it doesn't stand out too much. Her top is very well done, though it seems you haven't paid the same attention to her glove and skirt. Perhaps some finishing touches in those places would give it a more finished look. Besides that, I think the whites of her eyes could be whitened just a tiny bit more so they aren't the same colour as her skin.

As I said, these are minor points- the pic as a whole is very well done! Strong first submission to GFX ^_^ Before you get too lost in this place, take a peek at the Artwork guidlines http://www.gfxartist.com/about/FAQ/27572/ That pretty much covers everything you need to know about submitting artwork. Welcome to GFX! I look forward to further works from you.

I vote you +8 points ^_^

Good job. The arm on the left isn't that good in proportion. +6

Wow--It's a good thing this wasn't done in vector style, otherwise I'd have a run for my money. ^^

My only quirks are she seems a bit slanted at the top (I worry she's going to just fall over), and the straps around her waist line still look a bit 2D to me.

I had to check, but it seems this is your first submission (assuming previous ones were not deleted). Very awesome work.

That's really nice!

Nothing to add crit wise, it's all been said i think.

+7/7 Even though there are minor faults i can't bring myself to take a point off lol!

Very Nice Picture! I like it a lot!

great work!, i like specially the subtle job on the textures

Ok first, this rocks,

Now, for the nit picky stuff. The brush strokes around her elbow, of the wall attract alot of attention and doesn't give me the impression she is leaning on the wall itself. The body has great tonal variations, but the face seems flat. It's a whole different tone altogether and seems underdeveloped. I think if you push your darks a little bit more the resulting contrast would make this piece go from great to outstanding.

like it much!

Thanks a lot for the great comments! It encourages me to continue painting.
I will try to do it better the next time.!

I think the eyes and teeth could be just a shade whiter...
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Wonderful Work!

really good picture, i like the background too

Nice work!!! she has style!!!

it's not bad - i mean, you're talented and all, but i can't bring myself to like it mostly b/c it looks like some asian model wielding a sword she doesn't know how to use..
and her lips look a bit off

...but still wellllll done!

couldve been a real nice unique face, but only if it were scaled correctly, the nose and lips and eyes are great, it just seems....misconfigured. everything else good

Nice softish colors. I think her body could use more definition to make it look more organic and less like a doll, and the drop shadow on the wall could've been stronger.

lol, you're right GijsRoest, maybe i did sound harsh there, leaving only opinionated crits and not commenting on what i liked about it

hope that didn't cause any bad feelings esp since you were nice enough to comment on my stuff~ as harsh as it was, it was not untruthful of you

but what can i say that others have not already said? goldish hues like early morning make it appealing to the eye and the model is beautiful..

Sweet!

I love this one, too. If you are just getting the hang of the Wacom - you will be elite in six months!

thanks

She is gorgeous looking. You captured her look very well.