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Across the Dawn

Across the Dawn

Painting Painting \ Uncategorized | 01/03/05 @464 | keiiii | Comments critiques (16) | Views views (1829)


Across the Dawn
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Not exactly my masterpiece, but I felt this piece had a couple of personal mini-accomplishments. I mean, it has a GUY in it :p It had been a while since I did a finished picture of an adult male... (and it shows) Also, I like the mood of the pic.
 
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Avatar Almost-Human

 01/03/05 @564

Dream like ! guy needs a bit of work....

Dove looks cool

8+
 
Avatar acida

 01/03/05 @579

lovely 9/9 this is original i think, because of the papers flying, and then the bird with the guy is pretty good :)
 
Avatar uncle-xeN

 01/03/05 @626

stylish and original.
+9
 
Avatar TJVerhagen

 01/03/05 @651

Very nice, lovely colors. Magic hour. original too.
I agree with   Almost-Human though, the guy needs a bit more work.
 
Avatar enigmatix

 01/03/05 @713

Your lighting and depth is rather good. The figure looks a little strange to me. His waist seems lower than it should be and his right arm looks quite long. Overall, the composition is fantastic. I love how you added the paper air planes. They really give that sense of depth. Well done.
 
Avatar Wysiwyg

 01/03/05 @831

the lighting is beautiful, but yeah, that guy is sportin' one long ribcage...

great color pallete too (thumbup)
 
Avatar keiiii

 01/03/05 @844

Thank you for the comments! You guys are right, the guy really IS... long... well, he could be one of those 6' 4"+ tall people, but that wasn't my intention. Why did his proportions seem normal before I started coloring? |( I'll try to be more careful next time.

I don't get what you mean by "needs more work" though, especially since I spent more time on the guy than the rest of the pic put together. Could someone give me specifics? :)
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 01/03/05 @999

You seem to have a trademark colour and tone thing going on...and its very nice.Can always tell your stuff from the thumbnails alone.

:)
 
Avatar Phryneas

 01/04/05 @009

Well, he is... tall, but it doens't really disturb :) The only thing disturbing me is that the cloud are a bit too soft in my opinion - but this is just a minor crit - the overall pic is great as always :)
 
Avatar TOLEDO

 01/04/05 @353

The magic hour, so hard to portray.
Good job... but the sign plus website in black takes too much attention, unvalancing the piece. Try it in a lighter colour.
 
Avatar Kyena

 01/04/05 @371

Wonderful painting once more keiiii.
Beautiful colors again (amazing sky) and very original concept.
It's thrilling to see how you delevoped your sense for colors.

His upper body is definately too long (as others already pointed out). You can easily fix that in PS (yay for digital painting ;)). I think the fact that his hair concists of pretty rough single strokes gives the impression that it could use a bit more work thus some of the others did mention that.

His eye seems a bit strange to me and I think it's too big (specially since we look at it from the side.
 
B-nine

 01/05/05 @056

I love the colors that you used here, and in all yer paintings for that matter. however, I feel like this one lacks the definition to understand the forms of his body . a few harder edges and some more definition would definitely add to this.
 
Avatar Abstractor

 01/05/05 @231

Light and airy mood love it ! Agree with Toledo. Love the airplane dove combo. Great job Keiiii

Keith
 
Avatar Andy-Q

 01/07/05 @407

I can almost smell the fresh air... very good drawing!
 
Avatar Jane

 02/03/05 @577

I agree the mood is nice, and the lighting and the colours too. The guy looks a bit weird (at least his face), but not much! I just wish there were darker shadows included.
+7
 
Avatar Insanemime

 05/07/05 @220

This is nice...some of it is almost too soft tho. I should know...I am the king of the land of too soft and out of focus. Love the concept.
 
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