lets c... ur image is out of proportion, only her face is outlines, why not the rest? what did u use to colour it in? she has no shadow.
nice background colour tho, dig the eye.

practice makes perfect

tnx .. photoshop 7

Practice, practice, practice... then come back.

wow! 7el00 , bas yibalah ishwaya balance between the face or the head generally and body!

Alright! Real nice Keep up the good work habibi

thank you both... and yea im with u maryblackheart.. i always draw the head bigger then the body

I would suggest reading up on some Anatomy tutorials. Once you have a pretty basic grasp of that, look into some research on the subject of Depth, you know, shadows and things like that to add depth to your images. A different medium might help you too. I'm not sure, but I'm assuming those were oil pastels. Try colored pencils, they're easy to use, and even easier to shade with. Try to keep your style constant, what I'm referring to is the dark, dark outlines on the face and hair of the girl. The fact that it was only on her facial area and not the rest of her body. Try to keep something constant throughout your entire picture, otherwise it will often look amaturistic.

thaaaaaaaaank you for your time ... ill make the dark outlines dark throughout the whole pic next time .. and ill study the tutorials too.. thanx again

Not bad, I agree with the tutorial ideas, and studying other artists you admire and their styles. I'm just a beginner, but I'm working on that too. Not bad though. Keep it up!

It some severly anatomy proportion problems
from the Large Thumbnail seems to be good
her face and expression are well render, charming kind.
keep working.

Hi!
Cool. +8

thank you all