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3D Array

3D Array

Photography Photography \ Uncategorized | 03/09/05 @134 | recluse | Comments critiques (12) | Views views (579)


3D Array
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Hnn.... now this is interesting. My first work in b/w. Looks ok to me. Must get some suggestions about the composition in this one.. (I've never learned photography, so I have no idea...)
 
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Avatar Inabottle

 03/09/05 @145

Hmm not sure about this one, a lot of washed out area's the composition is good but I think the lighting is off... and focus seems a lil soft, not sure though... dont listen to me im slow
 
Avatar audentia

 03/09/05 @428

Very cool, like the high contrast, and the walls on the right side, it looks good in B&W.
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/09/05 @431

I like this. It's well composed. My eye easily follows through the photo. My one critique is the whites on the right side. They seem burnt out a bit. Good work nevertheless.
 
Avatar starturtle

 03/09/05 @470

I agree with MIchelle ...
big + from me
 
Avatar Madanapale

 03/09/05 @943

Well ...I do like the composition...a lot of movement...nice black and white....yes the higlights at the right are a little washed ..but in this kind of pictures I find that not very important...because the photo is more an absctrac!...well done !
 
Avatar Abstractor

 03/10/05 @185

Nice B&W , little wased out on right but thats a small thing, in fact it kind of works for me , keeps my eye following through. A good work

keith
 
Avatar Sven

 03/11/05 @373

Abstract ;) great B&W....i like the way my eye follows the "path"
(thumbup)
 
Avatar native29

 03/11/05 @532

Yes, comp. is ok, it just got overexposed, but still nice, creative shot
Well done!
 
Avatar eowyn

 03/11/05 @566

First bw attempt....?
nicceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:)
 
Avatar recluse

 03/12/05 @252

Wow! didn't know i'd get that good a response. thanks everyone. but the next one who comes up, can you explain WHAT composition is in this photo. I mean... when you say good composition, what do you mean? :$ (like i said, i've had no 'training' before)
 
Avatar Kurlowski

 03/12/05 @260

Hey, nice photo. I love the perspective. I like how its linear in the girder. The B&W looks good on this photo. Your border is cool! Nice job!
 
Avatar deuce

 03/18/05 @926

i like it....the washed out areas don't bother me so much...actually accents the framing a bit more....and you can still see the backround fence in-line with a beam...but ya it could be a teeny-weenie bit darker
 
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