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VLN NETWORK NEW SITE

VLN NETWORK NEW SITE

Design Design \ Interactive | 06/08/05 @406 | hady | Comments critiques (25) | Views views (1221)


VLN NETWORK NEW SITE
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hi all long time i don`t add any thing,
this is a new version of THE VLN NETWORK SITE
i still working in it now but i wanna your opinion ...

- PS CS2
- Flash transparency menus
- HTML

 
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Avatar mjkingz

 06/08/05 @475

hady i like it. clean design. Strong logo. update this too.

great! mike!
 
Avatar eowyn

 06/08/05 @539

clean and totally eye catching!
the colors are very nice!!!
 
Avatar blade7

 06/08/05 @600

i always like a clean, simple, yet effective corporate look to a web design layout:) full points
 
Avatar flowjoe

 06/08/05 @615

Hey man, that seems really good. Effective layout, good clean colors, not to busy and simple to find what you are looking for. Looks really good man, top score
 
Avatar Jujika

 06/08/05 @636

I really like the design too. The colors are considered well. Good job! :)
 
Avatar kittyKat

 06/08/05 @674

well.... I would like to see it finished...
right now its a nice clean design.... looks good
good colors
easy to read
...... I do think the tabs up top are a tad big...
let me know when its finished I would like to check it out :)
 
Avatar ARTOONATOR

 06/08/05 @768

It is VERY dry. Maybe some shiners and rounders would be nice.
 
Avatar vousavec

 06/08/05 @861

Nice! It is a very clean design... very relaxing on the eyes.
I love the top half, but the bottom is almost ....too angled/square. (Unless you use flash stuff over the top of it) <-can't you tell that I know nothing about making websites..heh heh?

I kinda like the bigger tabs - easier to click and find, especially for impatient and/or older customers... Then again, I would really enjoy seeing a full size version to decide for sure.

The search bar kinda throws me off - The transparent area around that is a little big (again, unless you have flash writing or other stuff going on there, perhaps frequent search topics, etc.)

Colors are great! And the background pic - good, too - not really a whole lot to pick apart, really! It's looks very cool!
^_^
 
Avatar hady

 06/09/05 @339

thanks all
 
Avatar Eleni

 06/09/05 @345

Excellent, clean design
awesome hady
 
Avatar audentia

 06/09/05 @395

Excellent! The red really adds contrast to this, and makes it artistic as well as expressive! Very professional:) My max!
 
Avatar Mnz

 06/09/05 @488

nice Clean
 
Avatar Dax

 06/09/05 @863

Nice choice of colors and very clear graphic!
Good work as always! :)
 
Avatar cupcake

 06/09/05 @931

You are so good.
Excellent
Top Mark
Cupcake
 
Avatar Prinova

 06/10/05 @257

Hi Hady, I hope you're ok, congrats on your score, mashaAllah
this is a great layout!!
 
Avatar Diane

 06/10/05 @489

Very very nice, I love it! +5/5
 
Avatar Alena

 06/11/05 @502

awesome desing...perfect slogan :) dont u also work in marketing :))
 
Avatar mccarlee

 06/12/05 @541

looks really good :) only crit is is that it looks alot like your other flash interactive design. lack of variation in your designs really would be a shame. you know, you got some great potentiol :) try as many ideas as you can think of ;).

4/5
 
Avatar Simba

 06/12/05 @594

i am very very very very......PROUD that u r Egyptian....God Bless u hady...bagd fare7an mooooooooooooot......Excellent...rubena ma3ak (thumbup) (thumbup)
 
Avatar bheeshoom

 06/14/05 @489

hey.. reallly cool.. love the colours used...

btw.. i like ur 60x60 px. avatar... ;)
 
Avatar SudnDeath

 06/15/05 @987

nice layout (thumbup)
 
Rodder

 06/15/05 @477

It's a decent start, but you have some major contrast & alignment issues to work out.

First the red. It works fine in the logo (cause its large) and the photo, but everything else is way too dark/saturated on an already dark/saturated background. It's very hard on the eyes and takes attention away from the section titles.

The section titles themselves are too bright. Pure white on a dark background, with minimal spacing around them is also very hard on the eyes.
A little tracking would help here too. Plus a off white/gray would match the navigation.

The slogan is hard to read/see. The text is a bit small and is overpowered by the contrast created by the navigation. It could almost go unnoticed. If you bump up the point size a bit, and realign it....most likely centered V&H then it would be easier to find/read. It would also match the alignment of the icons and help guide your eye over each.

With the sections below, be careful of alignment & border spacing. Usually these should be equal making it easier for the eyes to scan. The same is true for the section titles (box & text). Alot of the problems im seeing are only 1px off, though still important.

One last issue with the sections is contrast. Try to use contrast to build a hierarchy of importance. For example the left green box. Its much darker than the rest, so my eyes scan that first. The most useful information should go here. Next my eyes scan to the two boxes on the bottom (2nd darkest). But being both the same color, im not sure which to look at first. We read left to right, so put the least important information on the right. Because they are 2nd dakest, im actually overlooking the 2 boxes above it. You need some way to increase contrast or draw attention to those first. And put more relevant information up there than at the bottom.

That sounds like alot I know, but 10 mins worth of tweaks will improve this layout greatly.
 
Avatar hady

 06/15/05 @684

thanks it`s a great critique i admire your opinion it`s really important for me ;)
 
Avatar maytree

 06/17/05 @473

very cool design. the red and cold color works well together. the main buttons are too big for me, but it is only little crit on this clear design.
 
Avatar frixon

 09/21/05 @644

nice, but a bit cold in the lower half. but this is just my opinion. maybe add a red accent at the bottom which will connect with the logo at top thru the red "dots" ...

i'll vote on the finished version ;)
 
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