This is really cute. I like the linerart. Nice work!

Hehehe, that is REALLY cute and funny. I enjoy doing comics with my 'shoulder devil and angel', too. They're very rewarding for fun things.

I'm with the devil though. Sleep in, snooze, oh that's such a comfy bed

funny comic.
characters need some more cutness....just my opinion.

Nice and clean Edite, I suppose it's all too easy to cram stuff into comic strips. I love the face-off with the angel and devil (6th box). Nice style too.8

simple n sweet!
i like that you have used less colours here...

my max9+
cheers!
gulzar

Linda - thanks for your comment, and I am with the devil as well.

It s not easy at all AJ, actually when you have a limited amount of them and have to put a story in them --- well have to think a bit first, then plan it... oh well, takes time.

And Shyam, I think they re cute enough More of the cuteness, and I d never listen to them, they d be too cute.

Madalaine & Gull - thanks

LOOOOOOOOL!!!!! The two sides of Edite Kirse! This is a wonderful diversion from your usual work and brings to the fore your sense of humour. Yeah - we can all relate to the Devil 'n the Angel inside of us

You've picked a good subject and have completed your given task well. The linework is neat and precise too. Love it!

Well done Edite!

I really like this one but I do think the ending was a little soft
after you tell them to shut up
how did they shut up?
maybe could have put a few more frames showing there faces like OMG with a smirk look
from the devil to the angel and then I don't know you take it from there
good work FooXoo
ok.... I hardly ever see Xris... but he comes out when you post??
WTF Xris where the hell have you been??
I miss ya stop hiding XRIS!

Yeah I wish I had more frames, Pam, but the asignment didnt allow to have more, hard to tell the story with a few of them Thanks for the comment, I knew I should have kicked their asses

Very nice, a longer version would be good, but you don't want it to go on for too long... that and the paper isn't long enough +10

oops I think you misread what I meant Edite. I meant I like the fact you hadn't crammed stuff into the boxes, and you had obviously planned it out. That's why I said its all too easy for people ( I mean others) to just cram stuff in.

Ohhh, thanks for clearing that out

Funny comic and good job¡¡¡¡10+
Bea ))))

Very very good I had already seen it and I still love it! +10

Knowing what a night person you are and how you love to get up EARLY in the morning, this cracks me up!!
Well done Edite!

awesome job fooxoo. creative story

hope to see more like this,
+10
~slap

Lol, that's cute. My mind exactly. But what's with the last square?

Very funny work Edite! The design it's very kewl also! Why you don't use a little photoshop coloring on it? you can try experimenting with that! Nice characters btw! Congrats!

hehehe cool comics, it is funny dont worry bout that
im with the devilish girl

Very cute comic! Dont know what to say cause its all been said. But yes, some colours would be nice. Well done!

This is just great! 10/10

Interesting: I see it from the opposite: The angel wants me to sleep some more, the devil wants me to get out of bed for society.... There could be a big philosophical and metaphorical discussion on that

I like the basic idea of this one. Making comics is fun. Espescially when you'd try to take the viewer with you in the movement, the action and the emotion of the frames. By using flat frontal views you rob the comic of those qualities. Choosing more exciting camera-angles would do this one good.

Ugh...Arne took my crit in reference to different angles. While the same viewpoint makes it an easy read, emotion can be drawn when it's viewed from different perspectives.

Seeing how so many people in the community (meaning around the world) understand and enjoy this, shows you managed to acheive a universal appeal

Great work & idea.
+9

Brett is right, this a very universal statement and everyone around the world have some issues about getting up in the morning specially on mondays Arne and Brett comments are very interesting to read, as I also feels that this can be more, I don't know how more cause I am no expert in drawings, just a viewer, but I agree with both of them. And I think this is different in the GFX, to be honest I am getting bored with figures drawing as much as maybe people getting bored with potraits photography. So I say in full honesty that this work is different, funny, universal but can be done more The concept really grabs me! Hope I didn't say something offensive or stupid Nice one Edite.

Absolutely adorable!

Hehe, this is so fun but as realistic as it is only possible, very, very nice

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7183/thefight4an.png (32 colour png, 1/4 of the original size)
They might have ended up looking at the stars with a drink opened ..... But this is just fine with me ^_^

this is fun