draw me nearer to Your light

Photography \ Abstract | 09/24/05 @217 | eowyn | critiques (59) | views (2433)

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She wakes up on one early morning
Still dark and cold
Wind breezes to her lungs
White sheets along her eyes
Beautiful people all around
Clean souls float in the room
Still sleeping, still dreaming

Smells the air, lovely skinny air
A smile emerges around the surface
A pale skin on her cheeks with a blossom small nose
Hazy fears flying by
Singing the endless pain
Lost again
Scared again
Darkness underneath

Suddenly a warm breeze touch her pale cheeks
Up to her small nose
A light crosses her eyes
She turns around try to reach the speed of light
She stops and God speaks for her
God sings of the light
He promises her a secret garden
He gives her a bell of hopes, a jar of faith

Tears stream down on her face
A crystal clear view inside
The facets of God free fall
***
::Her Feelings She Hides by Fretty Aulia::

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Abstractor

09/24/05 @234

ahhhhhh Aulia, what a beautiful work...with perfect words. I just love your style.The concept is great, perfectly executed
love you, K

sami

09/24/05 @236

nice work.....tell me if i am wrong this is a glass right......good work...

Madanapale

09/24/05 @272

Looks like a glass to me...great eye...Excellent details...you transformed it into a beautiful picture!!....Very well done Eo....Love you!
Papito Carlos

bluemonkey

09/24/05 @273

the warpy feel is great and that is an AWESOME GREEN!!!! great use of blur and colors and its nice how its really clear in the circle thingy to show everyone that "hey look, i took it to be clear, focus here!" hahaha. w00t.

audentia

09/24/05 @390

Amazing poem, Fretty.... that touched my heart... really. Thanks for sharing it with us

The photo is so cool, very nice abstract. Great colours. Love ya

Hugs

zanzibar

09/24/05 @394

it has an hipnotizing effect... nice abstract, I like it.

denzmixed

09/24/05 @398

hello indonesian. salam kenal. the best thing is your poem, and i can't understand your photograph.

RistTO

09/24/05 @462

great great shot!

beautiful work as always keep it up!

patrix77

09/24/05 @469

And again I don't know what to say

Thank U Eo... photo is beautiful i love its colours the most but i wanted to thank U for this poem... this is exactly what i feel... beautiful... You're very tallented person I'm very happy i met You... Thank U Baby

sdavis75

09/24/05 @512

Very, very nice. Magnificent shade of green you've created. Well done. +10

pulverkaffe

09/24/05 @674

thats a very clean style.. i like this alot! keep it up

recluse

09/24/05 @734

Lovely. Just wonderful. What is that thing btw?

moserArtist

09/24/05 @736

Vow! 100% full respect for your artistic greatness!

Masterpiece! +10

ARTOONATOR

09/24/05 @790

Excellent
+10

Wysiwyg

09/25/05 @975

The light streak at the top being counterbalanced by the title itself was a really smart move...fantastic....no crits.

brainstormingin

09/25/05 @169

amazing. absolutely brilliant. i like it very much. +10

eowyn

09/25/05 @373

no papito, this is not a glass, this is a bottle of wine...

LoStSidE

09/25/05 @421

amazing. top score

flowjoe

09/25/05 @478

Stunning stunning work princess, well done, top score naturally

Stalker

mol

09/25/05 @705

WOw. I don't have much to say except for...wow. I love the color and movement. Beautiful work. +10

Basw

09/25/05 @797

Very special!

cupcake

09/25/05 @858

Excellent Fretty
The greens are so nice.
+10

beatrizmatar

09/26/05 @180

Excellent Fretty. I hope this will give you more confidence. +10

)))
Bea

eowyn

09/26/05 @248

Thank you Bee.....

Biter

09/26/05 @431

Great! beautiful work... nice compositions, colours, sharpen...

nod423

09/27/05 @024

What a great abstract and what a great description, wonderful work Fretty and am glad you didnt left

Hope all is well my friend

thienbao

09/27/05 @133

Beautiful colors, although i love the original version as well. Is that blur from the camera? weird...

eowyn

09/27/05 @255

No Bao, that is from the DOF, this is a bottle of wine, that was causing the blurry area

Dax

09/27/05 @413

Love this abstract Fretty! Well done!

maytree

09/27/05 @469

very nice abstract feeling!

emarts

09/28/05 @658

This is very nice. The depth-of-field makes a nice tunnel-vision effect. Nice movement in a still image. I love green, so I am instantly attracted to this image. Your decision to not center the photo was a smart one. This photo shows your creativity and vision.

Nice job.

JeeCie

09/28/05 @660

lol we indeed think the same, but did you make yours with this idea?
yours is better i think!
and a nice frame!
you get ALL my 5 points

eowyn

09/28/05 @661

Samson, thank you...I am blushed

JeeCie....hey!

bbreeze

09/28/05 @857

abstract. but interesting =)

hady

09/29/05 @374

hahah.... amazing one i love the colors and the photographer

eowyn

09/30/05 @109

*blushed* yeah right hady

thank you anyway

SudnDeath

09/30/05 @246

i like it looks like a shot glass +9

Alena

09/30/05 @598

oh wow

Einstein

09/30/05 @946

cool, very cool

JapiHonoo

10/01/05 @004

incredible... still love the original color.. but that works too
+9

Mugil

10/01/05 @461

Love this abstract Fretty! Well done! Another good work from you!

Eleni

10/01/05 @543

exquisite

Prasil

10/02/05 @631

Hey Fretty, long time don't see u....
Great work as always, congratulations

eshine

10/02/05 @937

Fretty! Sorry so late! This is wonderful, I did not know what it was at first, it made me think of something like water, and springtime

When I read down further I see it is a wine bottle and now it is clear to me! It is fascinating to make something so common into a lovely dream

Madilynnn

10/04/05 @155

Fretty this is so artistic and original! Very much in your style which I have always enjoyed. I like this version, but the original is my favorite simply because of the color. Nice work! I am looking forward to more.

- Rene

eremita

10/04/05 @844

Truly an abstract work!

spectorama

10/05/05 @616

beautiful ! Is that the bottom part of a glass?

acida

10/07/05 @764

i have to say this has really good quality jejeje

MsMichelleLynn

10/09/05 @593

Wow! This is awsome Fretty. I love the subtle colors and the glow of this object. I have no idea what it is but I don't have to. It's not important with a photo such as this. Technically perfect and aesthetically beautiful.

native29

10/09/05 @784

Great colors, pretty cool stuff
Well done, top marks.

edro

10/16/05 @508

wow i really love the colors and the depth.
very good work

it will be great to read your comments about my artwork

Rony

10/18/05 @611

great job

Simba

12/03/05 @930

isn't this beautiful??!!!!

AWESOME

tigaer

12/06/05 @661

well done here - i like the abstactness and how the pic literally sucks you in.

ceph

12/20/05 @240

ooh, i really love the detail amidst the blur.. very nicely done.

terencever

02/21/06 @520

when i look at the photo... i hear music... weird but true...

ZedoCaixao

04/04/06 @262

great work!!!!!!!!
congrats!!

anastasia

10/18/06 @531

Fantastic!

troublesleeping

06/06/07 @562

nice colors.

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draw me nearer to Your light

Photography \ Abstract | 09/24/05 @217 | eowyn | critiques (59) | views (2433)

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