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Obelisk

Obelisk

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 10/01/05 @687 | Peanut | Comments critiques (10) | Views views (604)


Obelisk
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A photo I took in egypt, since i am a beginner please post lots of criticism.
Thanks for viewing
 
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Avatar Madanapale

 10/01/05 @803

Beautiful details on the obelisk!.....very good perspective and composition....I may have cropped a little from the right.
Carlos
 
Avatar indifferens

 10/01/05 @941

been there. seen that.
It is a beutoful place, but cant say i like this pic. I would love to see more texture. Or focus only on obelisk.
 
Avatar pulverkaffe

 10/02/05 @348

sometimes when you have a great subject in view it can be
hard to find the calm and a perfect angle..
and you just wanna shoot it immediately.
subject here is nice, but i would maby look for another composition.
 
Avatar flowjoe

 10/02/05 @384

Some things I would change is the tilting and composition. First I would change it so the obelisk was straight, then I would crop it a bit tighter and put a frame around it. Looks like an interesting place, well done
 
Avatar Peanut

 10/02/05 @501

Thank you for all the criticism so far, i will take note, crop it, straighten the obelisk, and put a frame round it. Thanks again

Its a shame, i would have spent more time trying to get the shot perfect, but i only have a point and shoot digital camera, and I was kinda being hurried along by the rest of my group at the time.
 
Avatar zanzibar

 10/02/05 @554

all been said...
 
Avatar Alena

 10/05/05 @515

the rock on the right doesnt work,
nice anyway :)
 
Avatar Cigaro

 05/21/06 @608

pretty good shotpush up the colours more..they look a bit washed out;)
 
Avatar hiddensapphire

 10/31/06 @234

Good work, like the colors and lighting..however I think that the borders is a little too dominating, it makes the photo itself appear a little weak. Other wise..it's great. +7/8
 
waheednasir

 11/01/06 @275

nice shot peanut...:), in my humble opinion, do avoid having thick black/dark fames, they get too dominant and distracting, take all the attention.
i like the details on the obelisk...:).
all the best with your future shots.
 
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